Draft 5, Chapters 1-4: COMPLETE.

I was hoping to be further than four chapters, but I’ve been running into some real-life trouble lately. Nothing serious, just that annoying thing where I have to work longer hours so I can have more money. 🙄

If you live in the United States, you know how it goes with tax time. Also, my truck’s radiator needed to be replaced.

Sheesh, I thought my writing would have made me a billion dollars by now. Who knew being a nobody artist was tough on the wallet?

Anyway, most of the edits so far have been ‘world-building’ additions. As I said before, I’m going to include more lore about the planet in this book. I even tell you about the different days of the alien week and their names. Isn’t that fascinating? 🤯

Okay, time for the reviews. Continue reading →