Abandonment Party 2 Draft 5: Chapters 5-9 COMPLETE.
Again, mostly minor changes throughout.
I suppose I can mention one thing without too much spoilers: exclamations!
Y’know, those things characters say when they’re shocked or frustrated. Kim kept bugging me because ‘oh no’ and ‘dang’ didn’t sound alien enough. So I found a way to change a bit of the slang in this book.
There are quite a few new characters that will use the new exclamations from the get-go, but Mean’s dialog will be affected as well. You could say she’s going to get in touch with her other-worldly roots and start saying more UNEARTHLY things.
This will be set up in the chapters I just finished, and it won’t be THAT big of a change. Just a little spice. She won’t be singing Klingon opera or anything. 😄
Now let’s talk about the games and shows I’ve been watching. Although, SPOILERS, it’s the same show I’ve been watching all freakin’ year. 😑
Monster Train 2: My birthday was the ninth, and I got gift cards galore! My brother also gifted me the new Doom: the Dark Ages game, but my computer won’t run it. No ray tracing. Such a tragedy.
But that’s okay; the sequel to Monster Train is here! 😎
The first game was one of the most unique card battle games I’ve ever played, and the sequel leans into the creative insanity that made the first one so good. I mean, look at this:
