Another short chapter–as is my style during the finale. I have done this ONE time before so it counts as my style now. What should I call this technique that no other storyteller has thought of before? “Compressed intensity?” “Rapid-fire drama jabs?” Oooh, I like that one! I’ll go with that. Continue reading
Well, this is going to be short. There’s no point in going over the “choice edits” here; everything in this chapter has been incorporated into the second draft already. I’ll just continue on and review chapter 12, which will become chapter 11 for the second draft.
I will put the entire chapter up after the break, though; I want the first draft to be complete for anyone that wants to study it. I’ve heard that the creative writing classes at Dartmouth college have already added this site as mandatory reading. They had to toss out George Orwell to make room for me in their curriculum, but I’m pretty sure we’ve learned everything there is to know about Animal Farm. Continue reading
So I’ve got this giant dude clad in armor. I need an imposing theme to represent him on my playlist. So what will it be? Huh? What was that? You think I’m just going to use “The Imperial March” from Star Wars!? Well think again, sucka! Continue reading