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Kim Roasts Abandonment Party: Chapter 7

Posted on April 11, 2019 by Brad Smith
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First off, I have to admit something to Kim: You told me that using ‘less -ing words’ would help my writing and it did. So instead of “She entered the room, kicking the dog aside,” I’ve been putting “She entered the room and kicked the dog aside.”

Zounds! No more mixing tenses! I’ve SEEN the LIGHT!

Thank you, Kim. Now, on to the chapter. Continue reading →

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