AP2 DRAFT 5: STILL COMPLETE! BUT EVEN MORE SO!

I made a list of details and events that NEED to go into the book somewhere. “XXXX needs to witness XXXX happen at some point” for example. Or like “Add a scene where the mechanics of hex doors are completely explained.” And when I finished draft five, I notices that there were still about eight things on the list. 😅

And I added it all in. I searched the whole book for JUST the right place to put all of these vital ideas. Eh, except for one. I might need Kim’s feedback first. (It’s the part where I’m trying to decide if a character dies or survives the book.)

I did send the draft to Kim, but I haven’t heard back from her about it yet. Gosh, I should check to see if she actually received my email. It might have gotten sent to her spam inbox. Totally unintentional, I’m sure. 😑

Okay, I drove to her house after I got done writing this post. She did get it, but didn’t look at it yet. I’ll just send her this updated version then. I also taught her how to buy games on Steam. Continue reading →